Here I am at the waning days of summer and it
seems like the mind is swimming with ideas. This leads me to the subject
of this post: Environment. I want to draw on the collective intelligence
of the digital world and share some great places to find some great ideas about
environment.
It is always great to post a poem at the entrance
of your classroom door. A poem is an
invitation to fall in love with words.
Amy Ludwig VanDerwater wrote an incredible poem for her students. It is posted below and can be found on her
blog at http://www.poemfarm.amylv.com/2012/08/dear-students-new-book.html.
Another great poem to "roll out the carpet" to the beginning of a new school year is Invitation by
Shel Silverstein. I think I stumbled onto the idea for this poem when visiting Stacey Shubitz and Ruth Ayres blog at http://twowritingteachers.wordpress.com several years ago.
"If
you are a dreamer,
come
in,
If you are a dreamer,
a
wisher, a liar,
A
hope-er, a pray-er, a magic bean buyer...
If
you're a pretender,
come
sit by my fire
For
we have some
flax-golden tales to spin.
Come
in!
Finally, a poem that will be a mantra that will echo in student minds all year long and fuel a love of reading is Good Books, Good Times by Lee Bennett Hopkins. This poem provides wonderful opportunities for shared and choral reading as kids love the beat, pace and power of this poem.
Kate Roberts is a digital maven at weaving
technological tools in the workshop to inspire, educate and engage
writers. She had us view a clip, which
helped us examine the nature of a logical argument. In fact, she shared several clips that could
serve as digital touchstone or mentor texts that kids could use to learn
different moves that writers use to persuade or convince others. The following clip was a clip that we
revisited throughout the week. We mined
different mentor texts and clips to articulate the different moves that writers
use to persuade others.
The following
were some of our observations after rolling up our sleeves and examining a few different persuasive texts:
Persuasive Writers . . .
Use facts, tell
stories and anecdotes, appeal to the emotions of their audience, set a tone,
name reasons, anticipate counter-argument, demonstrate an author's passion
about a particular topic, rant, include different kinds of evidence, couch big
ideas inside of smaller, specific details, are accessible to readers through
the author’s tone or decisions about evidence to include/or exclude, craft their
writing so that it has rhythm, a repeated slogan, at times, a hidden agenda and
includes lists of facts in a rapid fire fashion
At the start of the week, Kate (as the
teacher) modeled through think-aloud and demonstration writing an attempt to
persuade her mother to follow her advice about a certain matter. We took on the role of students, and studied
the moves that she made in order to persuade her mother. After the modeling and demonstration, she
invited us to give it a go.
On-Demand Assessment
We were given a short burst of time to
write an on-demand piece of writing. An
on-demand is a writing assessment that is produced at the start of the unit (as
a formative assessment) to help the teacher take the temperature of the class
and determine where the class is, in terms, of persuasive or argument
writing. We were given the following
option if we were stuck for an argument: Write to convince people which flavor
is better – vanilla or chocolate.
An on-demand is an important tool if we
want to show growth because it gives us a before snapshot of what the student
was able to produce before the unit, and so at the end of the unit, it will be
important to provide students with the chance to write another on-demand piece
of argument/persuasive writing so as to examine the effects of our teaching. The CCLS name persuasive under the umbrella
of argument or opinion writing.
Assessment is in the spotlight with the
demands of the CCLS and other initiatives like Race to the Top exerting their
influence on schools. The TCRWP is an
excellent model and resource for assessment tools that inform instruction and
the argument/opinion continuum is a tool – like the narrative continuum – that helps
teachers determine where a child is at in terms of argument/opinion writing, in
order to, figure out what is in that child’s ZPD and decide on next steps for
that child as a writer.
Readers, what kinds of tools (or formative
assessments) are we using to inform our instruction and guide our teaching in
writing workshop? Have we gotten our 'feet wet' with on-demand writing? What methods have we used to integrate technology into our workshop?
Tomorrow I am going to be heading out to NYC to get together with
some friends and "get smarter" about writing. The summer
institutes at the TCRWP are the alltime
greatest opportunities for professional developmentin the field of literacy in the universe. The topics that I
will be rolling up my sleeves and delving into next week are entitled:
New Assessments, Tools, Minilessons and Mentor Texts Support State
of the Art Instruction in Persuasive Essay(4-8)
with Kate Roberts.
Revision Comes Not from Applying the Teacher’s Newest Strategy,
but from Rereading, Internalized Rubrics and a Growing Knowledge of What Works(3-8) with Audra Robb.
I am looking forward to getting together with some new friends
from my Twitter community and sharing our learning and thinking together online
through blog posts and tweets.
Please visit periodically throughout the week as I will be posting
daily about the learning come out of the institute and hope to bring all of you
with me so that you are part of the conversation. Be sure to leave questions – thoughts – and comments related to
posts and I promise to bring these to my respective sections and respond.
all of you awesome teachers! What I realize about our choices is that just
as books help our students craft readerly lives the read alouds we choose help to shape our classroom
communities – from The Tiger Rising to The Miraculous Journey of Edward
Tulane to The Year of the Book. All have the potential to create caring
classroom communities – where students not only care about reading, but care
about each other as well. When speaking
about helping our students explore their reading identities, Jennifer
Serravallo in Independent Reading
Assessment: Fiction says that, “Too often, I hear students refer to
themselves as a level. “I’m a P,” they’ll
say to a classmate. Part of me wants to
giggle at the image of a big letter P walking around with the student’s legs,
arms and head stuck to it. The other
part of me is saddened – this is a student who only sees himself as a letter,
without an identity of his or her own.” What a sad, but true commentary – as much as I know that it is important for kids to have
books in their hands that they can read with a high degree (96% or better) of
accuracy, fluency and comprehension – at times, I feel like leveling comes with
a price. Therefore, I think we need to
do all that we can to downplay leveling in our classrooms. However, at the same time, as Hattie’s research shows, feedback and goal setting are important to achievement, so it begs the question: how can we be honest with a child and at the same time preserve their dignity? I think a lot of it has to do with tone and encouraging kids to look forward instead of looking back with words like “I know that you’re here right now . . . but with a little spirit and guts . . . you’ll be moving in leaps and bounds in no time!” This is really the spirit behind Lucy’s early lessons onThe Best of Times and the Worst of Timesfor those of you who are familiar with the Reading UOS Series Grades 3-5. Colleagues, what do you do at the start of the year to help students craft readerly lives and see themselves – not as levels – but as readers? What do you do to downplay the negative effect levels can have on how a child sees herself as a reader? I stumbled upon this video and thought – in striving to bring technology into the workshop – wouldn't it be a great idea to have students create videos of reading recommendations. Check it out here:
It would draw
on their love of tech (a great motivator) and inspire them to share books they
loved with others (and help with summarizing the key ideas and supporting
details which is CCLS RL 4.2) – it’s all about creating a culture of caring about
reading and each other.
I am "getting my feet wet" with
the Independent Reading Assessment: Fiction (Grades 3 – 5) by Jennifer
Serravallo. It is in a word: AWESOME! This is the tool teachers have been
waiting for - and it is going to transform how teachers assess, plan and teach
readers in workshops across the globe. It's not that teachers might not
have been doing this kind of work - looking at student post-its and reading
entries, listening to their conversations, and using that data to inform their
instruction. However, for the first
time, this assessment tool helps to organize the teacher’s thinking and
sharpens their focus in looking through particular lenses.
Further, it give the teacher a full picture
of a reader’s experience with a text, from start to finish and provides an
abundance of resources along with Jen’s incredible guidance and expertise
through this vast terrain. I am using it
with a student I am tutoring and I was floored with the responses to some of
the questions in a text that was deemed just-right for this particular reader
based on running records. Readers, for
those who have experience using the assessment, what have you discovered? Did
student responses surprise you? How did you use it to create instructional
plans for students? If you would like more information or would like to order it for your classroom or school, you can find more information and a short video clip about it at the following link: http://teacher.scholastic.com/products/independentreadingassessment/index.htm
After attending the
following section at the July Summer Reading Institute with Shana Frazin,Close Reading of Texts: Teaching Kids to Monitor
for Sense, Infer and Interpret, I am determined to design my own reading and writing toolkits in
order to support my teaching during workshop. I am researching the web – looking high and low
– for examples to support my design. Shana shared her toolkits with us at the institute, which also
gives me an image of what I am working toward, but I still feel like I am a bit
confused about how to make the different elements of the toolkit more
interactive.
I will be posting here
the next few days to document my progress in making the kit. I think that I will design the kit around the
different units that punctuate the year. So I decided to start with Exploring My Reading
Life in September. I thought about the goals of the unit – studying ourselves
as readers, reading with volume and stamina, choosing books we’ll love and will
help us to grow, building stronger conversations around books and started designing charts with teaching points.
However, I am not sure if this is what I am supposed to do. I included some photos of this work in
progress. What are your thoughts,
readers?
I want to extend the work of the last post a
little bit. As teachers of reading, we can never underestimate the
importance of engagement and inspiration. In the words of Calkins, we
need to “wear our love of reading on our shirt sleeve.” What are some different
methods that we have used or plan to use in the upcoming month in order to
help students see themselves as readers, reflect on their own reading lives,
and cultivate reading identities as we launch that first unit entitled:
Building a Reading Life? What are our plans for INSPIRING students to become the kinds of people that state: Hold on! Just one more chapter. Although I am
thinking of changing that title to: Exploring and Nurturing Our Reading Life. Building a Reading Life leads one to believe that kids don't come into classrooms with their own reading histories. What do you think? What are some goals that we weave throughout this unit?
"Consider
the energy harnessed by having the minds in your classroom community come
together and focus on the language and events of the story you are putting in
the air. Consider the power of beginning
your day with all that energy traveling on a common current; every member of
the community rubbing shoulders with the same characters – pondering their
dilemmas, cheering their accomplishments, and sharing in the pains of their
struggles and losses. Consider having
the cumulative effect of all those readings as a common touchstone across the days,
weeks and months of the school year." Lester Laminack from Learning Under the Influence of Language and Literature.
I love summer. I love summer because it is all about renewal of the spirit. I love turning the page to the next chapter, another class, another chance for revision. A lot of thought goes into that first read aloud that we are going to come together around. I think I found that September book that I HOPE all of the kids will love as much as I did. Anna is the kind of reader that I hope the kids can imagine themselves into being (or perhaps already believe themselves to be). What is that all important first read aloud that you are planning to use to start off your year? Is it a old favorite or a new read? Please share the title and I will upload pictures on a wall in the blog (after I figure out how) to celebrate our intentions and launch us all off on another glorious reading-rich, buzzing about books school year.
In her closing speech at a the Reading Institute last month, Calkins shared some interesting pointers on holding tight to happiness in our profession.
1.Have
Mentors in Happiness
We need to learn
for each other. Find others
who can be points of light – who know things that we ourselves need to learn –
and observe and talk with these ones to draw on their talents, knowledge and expertise.
2.Student Work
This
is where the rubber meets the road. Student work needs to be central to
the conversations that go on within schools. It should almost be a MUST
that inside of curriculum conversations or conversations around student or
teacher learning that there is an artifact that stands in the center of the
conversation. Find JOY
inside of the stories of children – it is there – as a teacher we need to find
those gems and hold them up for all to see.
3.Bring the Spirit of the Institute
into the Fabric of the School
Our professional
learning can be a deep, meaningful life-altering incredible driving force or it
could be a bunch of notes in a closed notebook tucked inside of our bookcase
and forgotten. We need to bring the learning spirit into our classrooms and schools so that it becomes a
well of inspiration and a motivating force that moves our communities to new
heights.
4.What Brings True Happiness?
The ultimate
determining factor in achieving happiness is whether or not we are working on a
mission that matters, that is, a purpose that we believe in, alongside others.
I have decided to give the blog a new look and
even a new address. I hope this will be a "querencia" for
teachers of reading and writing. InWriting Toward Home: Tales and Lessons to Find You Way Georgia Heard
describes querencia as "a place where one feels safe (something we
all need in these times of reform where it feels like the earth is moving under
our feet). It is a place where one's strength of character is drawn, a
place where one feels at home. It comes from the verb querer, which means
to desire, to want.